Talk:Texas Commissioner of Agriculture visits schools to kick off National School Lunch Week

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Original reporting notes[edit]

  • I was present during this event today on this school campus. I attended the talk given by the commissioner and the brief press time following the talk.

Emails, Phone call transcripts, other written evidence[edit]

Interview details[edit]

On-the-spot notes[edit]

  • He is traveling all over the state, visiting various cities, giving presentations to kick off National School Lunch week. Comment during talk: "During the old days, the Three R's in school meant 'Reading, 'Writing and 'Arithmetic'.....but I want you students to remember the three E's: Education, Exercise and Eating right."

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Comments by reviewer: Will trust Buddpaul's word on this. Couldn't find a free picture of Todd Staples or a picture of the Orr Elemntary, but anyway.

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Comments by reviewer: Will trust Buddpaul's word on this. Couldn't find a free picture of Todd Staples or a picture of the Orr Elemntary, but anyway.

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Please change, 3rd paragraph......the word 'county' to 'country'. --Bddpaux (talk) 20:44, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Did not change, can't confirm. Maybe he was speaking locally to the people of Tyler. The source link is dead. Can you provide a source for the accurate quote? Sorry, Bddpaux. --SVTCobra 00:57, 15 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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