Talk:Texas college student found dead on campus

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Review of revision 1472097 [Not ready][edit]

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Revision 1472097 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:44, 17 April 2012 (UTC).[reply]
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Ok, I think adding the link to the press release took care of everything. Bddpaux (talk) 01:10, 18 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Thanks for clarifying the situation.
  • Unfortunately, these two sources are as dependent as can be. The KTBS source differs from the press release only (if I'm not mistaken) in that it leaves off the line about sympathies to the family and friends. Otherwise KTBS appears to be printing the press release verbatim.

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  • Thanks for clarifying the situation.
  • Unfortunately, these two sources are as dependent as can be. The KTBS source differs from the press release only (if I'm not mistaken) in that it leaves off the line about sympathies to the family and friends. Otherwise KTBS appears to be printing the press release verbatim.

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Yep, I've got more to put in there. Bddpaux (talk) 13:45, 18 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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No Foul Play[edit]

I go to school at TSTC and the dude just died. No foul play. He was playing video games til 1:30am and then they found him dead at 9am. Nobody knows what happened. He was a sweet kid.

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