Talk:Tony Blair resigns as envoy of Quartet to Middle East

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Comment[edit]

A concern, probably addressable by a reviewer during review, is to clarify what the Quartet is. One possible move would be to move the paragraph about that from the bottom of the article to second position, right after the lede. Slight tweaking of wording in the lede is also an option, possibly in addition to the paragraph move. --Pi zero (talk) 13:32, 29 May 2015 (UTC)

Review of revision 3548299 [Passed][edit]