Talk:Twin bomb blasts in 2 Philippine malls kill 6, injure 38

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I CREATED this breaking news blast article which happened about 4 hours ago here in Philippines. Please help review and publish this. Thanks.--Florentino Floro (talk) 10:09, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I did not change the title[edit]

Since this breaking news has been just 5 hours, and the police and medical people are still counting, I chose not to rename this. At present hour, 3 were killed and 47 were wounded, as the police corrected the report. Anyway, the reader will understand this, by reading the main paragraphs of the article and links. Thanks.--Florentino Floro (talk) 11:58, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Grammar[edit]

However, to be candid, I notice that the grammar may be wrong: injures should be injure. But since I am new here, I am afraid to change the title, I am not sure what the bad effects will be. So, I ask the KINDNESS of the reviewer to rename or correct the title if it is not correct. Thanks so much.--Florentino Floro (talk) 12:03, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]


Revision 742539 of this article has been reviewed by iDangerMouse (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:41, 18 December 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I ll fix the mistakes dont worry.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 742539 of this article has been reviewed by iDangerMouse (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:41, 18 December 2008 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I ll fix the mistakes dont worry.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

It should be "kill 6, injure 38." It's a plural.

Thanks[edit]

Thanks User:IDangerMouse, this is the first time I erred in the title. I had been feeling some colds yesterday, but my mistake really. When I put review, I saw my comedy of erros. I tried to rename it, but I was afraid since I am not familiar with the Information Technology on this, might ruin the process. So thanks so much. Cheers.--Florentino Floro (talk) 10:53, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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