Talk:Two men shot during robbery in Houston, Texas

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In the lede, I'm listing the second man's critical status as of 'late Tuesday evening' because the story (that I'm reading) was posted at 9:35pm and and updated at 10:05pm.....so that's the rough time frame we're dealing with news-wise. --Bddpaux (talk) 16:01, 11 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The way they update these article on-the-fly makes me crazy (but let's not beat that dead horse). There was some sort of update to the article at 12:01pm Texas time (not sure what they did), but the video from Tuesday night (their reporter on-scene) indicates a 'blood trail' was found leading from the business, around the corner and down an nearby alley, which police are investigating. --Bddpaux (talk) 18:14, 11 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I put that time bit in the 2nd para because that's how it stands right now, our time.....no suspects named(that could change 15 minutes from now!) --Bddpaux (talk) 19:38, 11 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

It's good practice to qualify statements about things not being announced, and the like. We should do it more often. Though some situations call for more precision than others. :-). --Pi zero (talk) 20:05, 11 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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