Talk:Two men shot during robbery in Houston, Texas

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Notes[edit]

  • In the lede, I'm listing the second man's critical status as of 'late Tuesday evening' because the story (that I'm reading) was posted at 9:35pm and and updated at 10:05pm.....so that's the rough time frame we're dealing with news-wise. --Bddpaux (talk) 16:01, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
  • The way they update these article on-the-fly makes me crazy (but let's not beat that dead horse). There was some sort of update to the article at 12:01pm Texas time (not sure what they did), but the video from Tuesday night (their reporter on-scene) indicates a 'blood trail' was found leading from the business, around the corner and down an nearby alley, which police are investigating. --Bddpaux (talk) 18:14, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
  • I put that time bit in the 2nd para because that's how it stands right now, our time.....no suspects named(that could change 15 minutes from now!) --Bddpaux (talk) 19:38, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
It's good practice to qualify statements about things not being announced, and the like. We should do it more often. Though some situations call for more precision than others. :-). --Pi zero (talk) 20:05, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

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