Talk:UK elections: Gordon Brown offers resignation to secure Labour-Liberal coalition

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Sources[edit]

Watching BBC news 24, statement made about half an hour ago.KTo288 (talk) 16:32, 10 May 2010 (UTC)

removed OR as now meets minimum of two sources one of which is a BBC one based on their on air content.KTo288 (talk) 17:11, 10 May 2010 (UTC)

POV?[edit]

Good work. Not sure about 'Last ditch effort'. If it was my editorial voice yes (it is my POV): perhaps my news voice would be, "In the latest developments in discussions between the Liberal Democrats and the two largest parties ...". --InfantGorilla (talk) 16:38, 10 May 2010 (UTC)

I agree here; even if not POV, 'last ditch effort' could sound a bit more professional imo. Tempodivalse [talk] 16:44, 10 May 2010 (UTC)
Thankyou, and done.KTo288 (talk) 17:11, 10 May 2010 (UTC)
Sounds better now, thanks! Smile.png Tempodivalse [talk] 17:14, 10 May 2010 (UTC)

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