Talk:UK teens cleared of school massacre plot

From Wikinews, the free news source you can write!
Jump to navigation Jump to search

Review of revision 883078 [Passed][edit]

Weasel warning[edit]

This sentence in the opening paragraph is a problem: "Police and the Crown Prosecution Service have been criticised for bringing the case to trial." By whom? Such statements must be attributed per WN:WEASEL. --SVTCobra 02:11, 17 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

In the lead? No chance. The lead must be kept trim; the criticisms are set out later in the article. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 06:27, 17 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]