Talk:US actor Patrick McGoohan dead at age 80

Review

Revision 752347 of this article has been reviewed by iDangerMouse (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:42, 15 January 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Not ready: Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Loads of cleanup need to be done, sources need to be fixed as well. And Some of the lines are copy paste (look like copy paste, meaning it has a lot of similarity to the author's original work). Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 752347 of this article has been reviewed by iDangerMouse (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:42, 15 January 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Not ready: Style: Not ready: Comments by reviewer: Loads of cleanup need to be done, sources need to be fixed as well. And Some of the lines are copy paste (look like copy paste, meaning it has a lot of similarity to the author's original work). Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review 2

Revision 752393 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:24, 15 January 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: No cats, several passages are confusing, short. Also why is the birthdate of one child important? Comments by reviewer: --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 05:24, 15 January 2009 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 752393 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 05:24, 15 January 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: No cats, several passages are confusing, short. Also why is the birthdate of one child important? Comments by reviewer: --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 05:24, 15 January 2009 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

I think the necessary style changes have been made. Categories were added. Please review. --SVTCobra 00:08, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

Review 3

Revision 752393 of this article has been reviewed by Red Thunder (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:38, 16 January 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: All clear, better style changes have been made. R.T. 11:38, 16 January 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 752393 of this article has been reviewed by Red Thunder (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:38, 16 January 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: All clear, better style changes have been made. R.T. 11:38, 16 January 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.