Talk:US actress and model Raquel Welch dies at age 82
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Revision 4709964 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:59, 16 February 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Passing this just before Friday starts; please work on distance from source. A couple of sentences were identical to one or more source sentences. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4709964 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:59, 16 February 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Passing this just before Friday starts; please work on distance from source. A couple of sentences were identical to one or more source sentences. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
@DRC-B5: I finished reviewing at 23:59 UTC and wanted the article dated Thursday, to appear more timely. Anyhow: I only encountered a few style issues ("born in", not "born at", "died", not "passed away", and her performances were awkwardly separated), and the sources verified everything, a great improvement. However, you must write in your own words. Copying a sentence and changing a couple words is still plagiarism. The "Despite her public image, however..." sentence was copied from the BBC article, and a few more were barely different from source' sentences. Even rearranging information in a sentence helps it avoid plagiarism. --Heavy Water (talk) 00:46, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
- And be sure to look at the edit history to visualize what I changed. --Heavy Water (talk) 02:20, 17 February 2023 (UTC)