Talk:United States: Jet loses engine cover over Pacific en route to Honolulu from San Francisco

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Review of revision 4382473 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4382473 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:18, 14 February 2018 (UTC).[reply]

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  • Style: Not ready: This is written in an encyclopedic style. The headline is a noun instead of a sentence. Neither headline nor lede focuses on the news event. We don't use footnotes. We don't divide the body of a short article into subsections. This is underlength, in both paragraph count and total volume.

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Revision 4382473 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:18, 14 February 2018 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not ready: This is written in an encyclopedic style. The headline is a noun instead of a sentence. Neither headline nor lede focuses on the news event. We don't use footnotes. We don't divide the body of a short article into subsections. This is underlength, in both paragraph count and total volume.

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If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Unattributed copy[edit]

The original version of this article was an unattributed copy of a Wikipedia article, this version. Yngvadottir (talk) 22:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I've hidden the content of those revisions. --Pi zero (talk) 22:17, 14 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4383211 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4383211 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:01, 15 February 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm not so sure this headline needs the prefix qualification "United States:".

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4383211 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:01, 15 February 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm not so sure this headline needs the prefix qualification "United States:".
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
Thank you! I've learned we do that for all the states and cities, so I thought it best to be safe. Yngvadottir (talk) 05:17, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Sister link?[edit]

Should the link to the sister article United Airlines Flight 1175 be added? It's being discussed for deletion and seems likely to be deleted, but by then this article will presumably have been archived. Yngvadottir (talk) 05:32, 16 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately... either not at the moment or (most likely) no. The Wikipedians voted "delete" on the whole Wikipedia counterpart. Therefore, it will likely be deleted (and redlinked if added). --George Ho (talk) 06:27, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
After so many years, there still seem to be so few Wikipedians who are familiar with the basic idea behind Wikipedia vs. the one behind this sister project. So with the actual difference, I mean. De Wikischim (talk) 08:52, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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