Talk:Victorian premier apologises for history of criminalisation of homosexuality

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Revision 4217929 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:05, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Avoid any writing technique that involves starting with source passages and modifying them. I could have not-ready'd this over copied passages; I chose to push on with it and try to adjust passages where necessary. The adjustments I made aren't as good as what a writer could and should do (because as a reviewer I was obliged to modify as little as possible), and I'm honestly unsure whether I made the right decision by pushing on. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4217929 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:05, 25 May 2016 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Avoid any writing technique that involves starting with source passages and modifying them. I could have not-ready'd this over copied passages; I chose to push on with it and try to adjust passages where necessary. The adjustments I made aren't as good as what a writer could and should do (because as a reviewer I was obliged to modify as little as possible), and I'm honestly unsure whether I made the right decision by pushing on. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.