Talk:Wikinews interviews meteorological experts on Cyclone Phalin

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Reporter Notes[edit]

Scripts to be forwarded. --Computron (talk) 10:15, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
If someone may be able to improve the lede that would be greatly appreciated. --Computron (talk) 10:15, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
Richman - sent
Snow - sent
Saravanan - sent
Zhang - sent
Titley - sent
Knight - sent
Morrissey - sent


Hi there,

Can't comment on content (since I can't remember my password, and so, I can't check it). However, it does seem reliable. Re. style: I made some minor changes; Maybe you could expand the lede by explaining more about consequences of the cyclone (for readers with no knowledge of the topic). Also, I recall there is an 'inline' OR template for the sources section, so that the blank portion of it does not seem empty anymore. It's newsworthiness is unquestionable, as the cyclone (acc. to WP) is still active. If I were still a reviewer, I'd give this a yes. D. Grez 21:31, 13 October 2013 (UTC)

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