Talk:Wikinews visits haunted attraction 'Doc Wilkes House of Horrors'
Add topic- Toured on Sunday 515pm local time. --Bddpaux (talk) 02:56, 7 October 2015 (UTC)
- The lighting and sound really serve to round out the experience.....a very 'multi-sensory' event!! Narrow passageways and step ups/step downs....scary stuff! --Bddpaux (talk) 17:42, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
- Verified '13th year' with Laura. Also the description of the front/queue is via my observation (those photos didn't make it into the cut).--Bddpaux (talk) 18:03, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
- Editor: check Scoop for pretty much first and second para stuff. Most of 3rd paragraph is via their web site. --Bddpaux (talk) 18:04, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
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Revision 3885486 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 08:21, 10 October 2015 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Did a bunch of copy-editing. Read all the notes on the talk page. Removed phrase, "and many more..." = as that sounds POV and like a commercial. The rest of the writing was pretty good, just did a bit of copy-editing, throughout. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |