Talk:Zimbabwean footballer Adam Ndlovu dies in car accident aged 42

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Review of revision 1741355 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1741355 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:20, 16 December 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The Daily Mail and The Sun sources obvious drew on some common source. The Sun's headline occurs almost exactly in the Daily Mail's article; the use of the word "horror" is distinctive.

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Revision 1741355 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:20, 16 December 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The Daily Mail and The Sun sources obvious drew on some common source. The Sun's headline occurs almost exactly in the Daily Mail's article; the use of the word "horror" is distinctive.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

This is kind of short on biographical information about the deceased to qualify as an obit; see usage note at Category:Obituaries. --Pi zero (talk) 17:23, 16 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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