Not bad, just a few minor grammar errors.
Fragment of a discussion from Comments:Delta Air Lines jetliner skids off New York airport's runway
Sorry, I am new to wiki news. I thought I was commenting.
Certainly. Comments welcome. I also was just commenting. Truly, you're welcome to read up on how the project works, and take a stab at contributing.
Oh. Okay, I'm an idiot. You have submitted an article. Now I see. Yes, this is the comments page, it's usually used for comments on the story covered by the article. For comments like grammatical criticisms, you want the collaboration page.