Not bad, just a few minor grammar errors.
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
Well, you're supposed to put "members" after "crew". Overall, the article was okay, but the news you reported wasn't so thrilling.
This is a wiki; we publish articles that are submitted and pass review. If you'd like to see different articles, read WN:Pillars of Wikinews writing, then WN:Writing an article, and for good measure WN:Style guide, and try your hand at submitting an article.
"members" after "crew" is what Language Log calls a "zombie rule". However, because this is a wiki, you have the ability to submit an edit to the article (since it's not yet in the fully protected archives).