User talk:B.j Shepherd/Australian milk retail price war hitting farmers

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  • This could be newsworthy. However, it should be in paragraphs; follow the Style Guide; mention where this is taking place up-front; use less sources if possible; ditch the byline that makes me suspicious of copyvio. --Brian McNeil / talk 02:52, 22 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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I just saw the story about the beer on the news the other day. I'll follow it up I myself live in Australia. This story has to be over two weeks old now! A better path may be the recent action Fosters have taken over plans to severely reduce their prices at retail (a move by Coles). ~YTT T | C 10:59, 23 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Fosters? As in the 'alleged' beer? ;-)
It might be interesting to compare the two since on is pretty much an essential; the other most certainly not. --82.132.139.49 (talk) 11:23, 23 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]