Talk:Albert Pujols ends his worst homerun drought

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Review of revision 1492659 [Not ready] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1492659 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:42, 7 May 2012 (UTC).
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Comments by reviewer:

  • This is well below minimal length for a standalone article. We generally want at least three medium-sized paragraphs.
  • A dateline (like, "Anaheim, California, United States – ") indicates where the reporter is reporting from. Are you reporting from Anaheim (and is there some reason why that matters)?

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Review of revision 1493223 [Not ready] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1493223 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:03, 8 May 2012 (UTC).
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  • Verifiability: Symbol question.svg Not ready: Articles require a minimum of two independent, trustowrthy sources. Although this is an improvement on the other baseball article in that there are different authors here (one wire report, one written in-house), at the end of the day the only source here is still ESPN.
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Comments by reviewer: I'd probably have bitten the bullet and let this through on length. However, if one-two sentences could be added, that would be good.

Assuming no drastic problems appear during an intense review, all this really needs are incorporating an extra source and maybe adding a sentence or two of info from it. Otherwise, this is close to being ready.

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Review of revision 1493376 [Passed] [edit]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 1493376 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:27, 8 May 2012 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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