Talk:Florida judge awards Zimmerman $150,000 bond in Trayvon Martin shooting

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Review of revision 1475155 [Not ready] [edit]

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  • This assumes context that an international audience should not be assumed to have. The headline doesn't say where in the world, assuming that readers will known who Zimmerman and the Martin family are. The lede similarly fails to explain for a reader who isn't already familiar with the story.

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Review of revision 1477080 [Passed] [edit]

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