Talk:Hurricanes may be associated with sunspots
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[edit] Review
Revision 703349 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has failed its review at 07:08, 2 October 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Bit awkward. Mentions decrease in sunspots = increase in huricanes 3 times. "that there will a 10 % decrease" makes it sound 100% sure. --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 07:08, 2 October 2008 (UTC) The article should be switched from {{Review}} to {{tasks|copyvio|news|src|mos|re-review}}, if it has not already been done, and these issues should be addressed. It is recommended that the appropriate templates be added to the article itself, if applicable. This talk page should be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- Waiting for the second review. Thanks.-- TharikrishTalk 15:41, 3 October 2008 (UTC)
[edit] References & casually added sources
- References is not a valid Wikinews section header. It should be external links.
- Sources should not be added which no content is drawn from. This is apparent here as one edit adds these sources with no changes to the article body to evidence they have been used.
--Brian McNeil / talk 13:48, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
Done (?)-- TharikrishTalk 14:51, 2 October 2008 (UTC)
[edit] review 2
Revision 703533 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:25, 4 October 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Still reads rough in some areas & still stale - but seeing is how "busy" things have been the last 24 hours... --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 00:25, 4 October 2008 (UTC) The article may be switched from {{Review}} to {{Publish}}, if it has not already been done. |
