Talk:Reverend Billy Joe Daugherty dies at the age of 57

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[edit] Review of revision 915603 [Failed]

Symbol unrelated.svg Revision 915603 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:07, 23 November 2009 (UTC).
  • Copyright: Symbol abstain vote.svg Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Verifiability: Symbol unrelated.svg Not ready: Not checked either
  • NPOV: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Style: Symbol unrelated.svg Not ready: Not written with an international audience in mind? Who is he? What's the Victory Christian Centre? What nationality is he? Should be a country in the lede.

Comments by reviewer:

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.


[edit] Review of revision 915919 [Passed]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 915919 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:23, 24 November 2009 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: Required significant copyedit due to passive voice, excess use of "also", and some other issues/awkwardness.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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