Talk:Accident at Russian hydroelectric plant kills ten

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Review of revision 863085 [Passed][edit]

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Can the title be shortened any? And if not, can it at least mention the fact that ten people lost their lives, which is, I would have thought, the most newsworthy aspect of this story. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 22:25, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This does not appear to based on the listed sources and may be written using other sources. "hydraulic shock" is not mention in any listed source. --SVTCobra 23:13, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The new title sounds much better. Tempodivalse [talk] 23:37, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]