Talk:Accident at Russian hydroelectric plant kills ten
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Revision 863085 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:30, 17 August 2009 (UTC).
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[edit]Can the title be shortened any? And if not, can it at least mention the fact that ten people lost their lives, which is, I would have thought, the most newsworthy aspect of this story. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 22:25, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- This does not appear to based on the listed sources and may be written using other sources. "hydraulic shock" is not mention in any listed source. --SVTCobra 23:13, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- The new title sounds much better. Tempodivalse [talk] 23:37, 17 August 2009 (UTC)