Talk:British constable may be prosecuted for manslaughter
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Latest comment: 15 years ago by SVTCobra in topic Review revision 857018
This will fail a review as it is not written with an international audience in mind. It is completely UK-centric in title and opening and doesn't even mention what country it refers to. --Brian McNeil / talk 11:06, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion, I've retitled the article and added a new introduction, do I need to do anything else to internationalise the article.KTo288 (talk) 12:33, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
- Great improvement on the title, I couldn't think of anything. --Brian McNeil / talk 12:35, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
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Revision 857018 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:24, 5 August 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: --SVTCobra 19:24, 5 August 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 857018 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:24, 5 August 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: --SVTCobra 19:24, 5 August 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |