Talk:British constable may be prosecuted for manslaughter

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Latest comment: 14 years ago by SVTCobra in topic Review revision 857018
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This will fail a review as it is not written with an international audience in mind. It is completely UK-centric in title and opening and doesn't even mention what country it refers to. --Brian McNeil / talk 11:06, 5 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the suggestion, I've retitled the article and added a new introduction, do I need to do anything else to internationalise the article.KTo288 (talk) 12:33, 5 August 2009 (UTC)Reply
Great improvement on the title, I couldn't think of anything. --Brian McNeil / talk 12:35, 5 August 2009 (UTC)Reply

Review revision 857018[edit]