Talk:Cowboys for Trump founder convicted of entering U.S. Capitol illegally during January 6 attacks

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I am not fond of the current title of this article. It fails to address an international audience. And I am not meaning to use "January 6" in the title which I suspect could also be confusing. And "one count" doesn't mean much either. Counts of what? It could be anything from murder, treason to simple trespassing or loitering. I notice Griffin is described in sources as a leader or founder of 'Cowboys for Trump' so maybe that should be in this, instead of just calling him a 'member'. Cheers, --SVTCobra 00:42, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Please, then, replace the title. Darkfrog24 (talk) 04:48, 24 March 2022 (UTC) I do sometimes forget to de-Americanize the perspective... Darkfrog24 (talk) 13:19, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I hope I didn't offend you. However, I will suggest you uncheck the box that says "leave a redirect" when you rename articles which have not yet been published. Cheers, --SVTCobra 02:36, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Revision 4669969 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:14, 25 March 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: As for comments, don't assume people have a page to link to. Don't include speculation from the sources. Don't omit an acquittal that came in the same ruling. Otherwise, nice job!

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Revision 4669969 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:14, 25 March 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: As for comments, don't assume people have a page to link to. Don't include speculation from the sources. Don't omit an acquittal that came in the same ruling. Otherwise, nice job!

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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