Talk:Dozens dead in Mumbai after consuming toxic alcohol

Headline

I feel that the headline doesn't convey the exact meaning. More information could be included. Like 84 dead after consuming toxic alcohol in Mumbai or something like that.
aGastya  ✉ Dicere Aliquid :) 18:14, 20 June 2015 (UTC)

Review of revision 3609012 [Passed]

Revision 3609012 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:32, 20 June 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Try to avoid specific death tolls in headlines; we don't like to rename articles after publication (can cause duplicate entries in some feeds). In this case the particular number is actually single-source; I covered that with some weak attribution, though one could do better, describing the rising figure, with more intervention than a reviewer can afford. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3609012 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:32, 20 June 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Try to avoid specific death tolls in headlines; we don't like to rename articles after publication (can cause duplicate entries in some feeds). In this case the particular number is actually single-source; I covered that with some weak attribution, though one could do better, describing the rising figure, with more intervention than a reviewer can afford. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Admin action needed

{{editprotected}} Image: Media House of Chief Ministers Office, Mantralaya, Mumbai< Maharashtra, India. there is a < in the {{image}} that should be replaced with a comma.
14.139.242.195 (talk) 07:49, 5 October 2015 (UTC)

Done --Pi zero (talk) 16:41, 5 October 2015 (UTC)