Talk:F1: Massa wins 2008 Brazilian Grand Prix, Hamilton wins championship
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--Brian McNeil / talk 10:47, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
The paragraph that starts "On the last wet lap ..." is very hard to read and appears to have factual errors. --SVTCobra 16:03, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
- It ties with the first source, although this is sports speak. --Brian McNeil / talk 16:40, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
- It's not the "subida dos boxes" reference. Try to read it slowly ... it is very convoluted ... also confusing (referring to someone as the McLaren driver when there are two on the track). I'd work on it myself, but I am at my paying work and the British Pound is falling.--SVTCobra 17:33, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
- I finally had time to make the changes that I felt were appropriate. --SVTCobra 00:34, 4 November 2008 (UTC)
- It's not the "subida dos boxes" reference. Try to read it slowly ... it is very convoluted ... also confusing (referring to someone as the McLaren driver when there are two on the track). I'd work on it myself, but I am at my paying work and the British Pound is falling.--SVTCobra 17:33, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
I have edited this article to correct the factual errors and make it read better. 6 Nov —Preceding unsigned comment added by 195.82.37.47 (talk) 13:28, 6 November 2008 (UTC)
png -> svg replacement
[edit]{{editprotected}} Please replace the PNG raster image with the essentially identical SVG vector image. Just need to replace the image file extension (.png -> .svg), as the filename is the same. Cherkash (talk) 21:26, 13 November 2017 (UTC)