Talk:Fire in Pichilemu, Chile kills family of five

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I gathered some information during the day (Sunday), and wrote this article. It was even easier to find information as reporters from local radio stations were all over the affected place and I was there. Geographic location is given in the article body (I think) Diego Grez (talk) 04:06, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1312607 [Not ready]

Revision 1312607 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:40, 31 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: The OR notes are inadequate. No way of telling what information came from where, there's no way for a reviewer to verify. NPOV: Not ready: ALLEGEDLY intentionally set. And (back on verifiability), alleged by whom? Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1312607 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:40, 31 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: The OR notes are inadequate. No way of telling what information came from where, there's no way for a reviewer to verify. NPOV: Not ready: ALLEGEDLY intentionally set. And (back on verifiability), alleged by whom? Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

With luck, I might be able to review this again if resubmitted within the next hour or conceivably two. Keeping in mind, we're in the middle of a multi-day power outage here and I only get power (for internet access and everything else) for a few hours twice a day. I'll be back on, I hope, for 1–3 hours starting at maybe 2100 or 2200 UTC. --Pi zero (talk) 13:45, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

Detailed OR notes

I (Diego Grez) went to the affected home, where there were several journalists and cameraman recording the people who was "watching" the scene.

All of the quotes are either taken from Radio Somos Pichilemu or Radio Entre Olas, both of which broadcasted the whole day information respecting this. (Maybe should be marked as Broadcast report?)

The geographical data (is located in Dionisio blah blah) and such things are "general culture" over here.

A radio presenter nicknamed "Cote" from Radio Somos Pichilemu said it was "allegedly set on fire according to witnesses reports."

Diego Grez (talk) 00:27, 1 November 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1313566 [Passed]

Revision 1313566 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:50, 1 November 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Much of this really should be better attributed. The things where it seemed most especially problematic, I removed. I'd be much happier with better notes. I'd particularly like to know just which information came from which radio station — for example, when the article says the owner said something to live radio, if that's an exclusive for the radio station we'd like to give the radio station credit. Ideally, of course, the notes would include a rawer form of all information appearing the article. I'm allowing the article on this occasion, but earnestly encourage you to keep really good, detailed notes for this sort of thing in future, and provide them. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1313566 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:50, 1 November 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Much of this really should be better attributed. The things where it seemed most especially problematic, I removed. I'd be much happier with better notes. I'd particularly like to know just which information came from which radio station — for example, when the article says the owner said something to live radio, if that's an exclusive for the radio station we'd like to give the radio station credit. Ideally, of course, the notes would include a rawer form of all information appearing the article. I'm allowing the article on this occasion, but earnestly encourage you to keep really good, detailed notes for this sort of thing in future, and provide them. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.