Talk:Former Irani president Rafsanjani dies, aged 82

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What was the context of the quote "I don't think the country could have been run worse"? Was it a response to his losing the candidacy in 2013? The whole fourth paragraph jumps around and it's not clear how the ideas are connected to each other. Darkfrog24 (talk) 21:05, 8 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4277400 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4277400 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:10, 9 January 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There were distance-from-source problems here, which I tried to alleviate (such as I could, being limited as a reviewer to relatively superficial edits).
  • The reform aspect of Rafsanjani's political career seems, from the sources, to have been an important part of who he was; it's brought out a bit by some of the clarifications I made, but of course I couldn't blatantly add material.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4277400 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 03:10, 9 January 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There were distance-from-source problems here, which I tried to alleviate (such as I could, being limited as a reviewer to relatively superficial edits).
  • The reform aspect of Rafsanjani's political career seems, from the sources, to have been an important part of who he was; it's brought out a bit by some of the clarifications I made, but of course I couldn't blatantly add material.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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