Talk:India: Kerala police registers case against bishop for allegedly raping nun more than a dozen times

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Review of revision 4417320 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4417320 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:39, 30 June 2018 (UTC).[reply]

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Comments by reviewer:

  • None of the sources indicate they arrested the bishop.
  • Only one of them says he accused her of blackmail; another says he accused her of threatening to kill him, and the third source just says "threatened" without further specification afaics.
  • If all the sources agree the number is at least thirteen, we're probably safe with the headline as long as we acknowledge the uncertainty in the lede.

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Revision 4417320 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 22:39, 30 June 2018 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • None of the sources indicate they arrested the bishop.
  • Only one of them says he accused her of blackmail; another says he accused her of threatening to kill him, and the third source just says "threatened" without further specification afaics.
  • If all the sources agree the number is at least thirteen, we're probably safe with the headline as long as we acknowledge the uncertainty in the lede.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4417353 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4417353 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:12, 1 July 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm quite willing to believe writing from the sources was even messier than reviewing from them. I hedged a bit more on the sentence about the bishop's complaint.

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Revision 4417353 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:12, 1 July 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I'm quite willing to believe writing from the sources was even messier than reviewing from them. I hedged a bit more on the sentence about the bishop's complaint.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Edit[edit]

{{editprotected}} There's a loose curly bracket after "Catholic" in the lead. Heavy Water (talk) 18:31, 11 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done --SVTCobra 18:12, 12 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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