Talk:Influential rock drummer Ginger Baker dies at age 80
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Pi zero in topic Review of revision 4519755 [Passed]
Notes for the reviewer
- I just noticed, my words at the beginning of the biography section are eerily close to LAT. I swear I wrote mine before I even saw their article because it wasn't until I needed the year Cream was formed that I sought a third MSM source, but if it needs to be change for the sake of 'distance', so be it.
- I should also mention regarding Baker's anecdote about how he started drumming, I used the adverb 'often' which is a bit of a presumption, but since two sources had different quotes about it, it seemed very likely to be the case especially given it was 60+ years ago. If it needs to be changed to the longer-winded 'more than once', well, so be it.
Cheers, --SVTCobra 23:40, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
- Changed "often" to "sometimes", which is verifiable and reads similarly. --Pi zero (talk) 19:21, 7 October 2019 (UTC)
Review of revision 4519755 [Passed]
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