Talk:Job market in France suffers as unemployment rate hits fifteen year high

Comments

Some things I can see immediately:

• Links within the article should use {{w|...}}, not [[w:...|...]].
• Date format in the Sources section doesn't follow the style guide, WN:SG#Dates.
• There should be, at minimum, a country category (and the continent category it belongs to) and a section category (in this case, that'd be Category:Economy and business.
• There should be an infobox; likely, either {{Economy and business}} or {{France}}.
• Places and people should be linked on first occurrence, Such as {{w|France|French}}.

--Pi zero (talk) 03:38, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Attribution problem

I notice there are several passages here that need attribution. When you say "it was predicted/believed/assumed ...", this begs the question, predicted/believed/assumed by whom? Moreover, if the answer isn't very specific, there may be a problem with whether it can really be verified (even if a source says it, if the source appears to have been handwaving, one has to stop and think about whether the source is simply projecting its own expectations). --16:36, 8 June 2013 (UTC)

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Revision 1920251 of this article has been reviewed by RockerballAustralia (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 09:51, 9 June 2013 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Had to remove some stuff but otherwise alright The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.