Talk:Manchester United signs Pogba, now costliest player in history

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Review of revision 4239741 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4239741 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:28, 9 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]

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  • I didn't see anything about the whole costliest-in-history thing, nor about any team of the year. Unverified passages: the tail of the lede, from "making him the most expensive" on; and the last sentence of the third paragraph, about teams of the year. Given the size of the article and the prominence of the costliest-in-history (both in headline and in lede), I'm inclined to send this back for revision.

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Revision 4239741 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:28, 9 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • I didn't see anything about the whole costliest-in-history thing, nor about any team of the year. Unverified passages: the tail of the lede, from "making him the most expensive" on; and the last sentence of the third paragraph, about teams of the year. Given the size of the article and the prominence of the costliest-in-history (both in headline and in lede), I'm inclined to send this back for revision.

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If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4239882 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4239882 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:36, 10 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 4239882 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:36, 10 August 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Error in the Facebook link of this page[edit]

@Brian McNeil: Facebook link of this article says that Pogba signed a €105 million contact with United. But, United paid Juventus €105 million to purchase the player. Please fix that.
acagastya 09:03, 22 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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