Talk:No-fly zone demanded by Syrian protesters

Review of revision 1311322 [Not ready]

Revision 1311322 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:03, 28 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: Use inverted pyramid style. Starting with a lede that answers as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about the news event. That's not the case here, clearly; the news event, whose occurrence makes the story fresh, is clearly defined by the headline as the call for a no-fly zone, but that isn't even mentioned in the article text until the third paragraph. One place to find inverted pyramid style described is WN:Article wizard/Inverted pyramid. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1311322 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 20:03, 28 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: See below. Comments by reviewer: Use inverted pyramid style. Starting with a lede that answers as many as reasonably possible of the basic questions about the news event. That's not the case here, clearly; the news event, whose occurrence makes the story fresh, is clearly defined by the headline as the call for a no-fly zone, but that isn't even mentioned in the article text until the third paragraph. One place to find inverted pyramid style described is WN:Article wizard/Inverted pyramid. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1311646 [Passed]

Revision 1311646 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:17, 29 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1311646 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:17, 29 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Category

{{edit protected}} Please move this article from Category:Syria to Category:Syrian Civil War. Thank you. Green Giant (talk) 17:37, 1 October 2015 (UTC)

Added to the latter. --Pi zero (talk) 01:00, 2 October 2015 (UTC)