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Latest comment: 3 days ago by Michael.C.Wright in topic Review of revision 4808386 [Passed]

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@JJPMaster

Could you please change headline to active voice

Add location -- answer to where amd how -- to first paragraph

Add wikilink and a clarification in text what a "emergency martial law" is

Thanks, Gryllida (talk) 10:17, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

  1. Done
  2. I figured that "South Korea" would have been sufficient for the "Where" question, so what were you looking for, specifically?
  3. Done
JJPMaster (she/they) 15:15, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ping: Gryllida (t · c · b) JJPMaster (she/they) 15:16, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
i.e Where did the assembly take place
what is the martial law is still unclear Gryllida (talk) 22:55, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think we need to remove nytimes source as it is paywalled. Does it have information that other sources don't? Can it be removed or supported by another source? Gryllida (talk) 23:03, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
When: "Around 23:00 local time on Tuesday (14:00 GMT)," (BBC source) (information supported only by one source) Would be great to find an additional source supporting this, then add this information into first paragraph. When adding time, add its equivalent in UTC in parentheses also.
How: Apparently the martial law was called on TV address. (bbc, cnn)
Hope you can add this information @JJPMaster as my editing would make me involved in editing and then I cannot review? Gryllida (talk) 23:12, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
"President Yoon's speech attributed his decision to impose military rule to the National Assembly initiating "22 impeachment motions against government officials, and ... pushing for the impeachment of 10 more" ---- when did this happen? Gryllida (talk) 23:13, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply
@JJPMaster Gryllida (talk) 22:55, 5 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 4807818 [Not ready]

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Misquote

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In the second paragraph the following quote is attributed to Yoon, citing the transcript of his speech: "22 impeachment motions against government officials, and ... pushing for the impeachment of ten more."

The transcript states the following: "...22 motions to impeach government officials, and has been pushing for the impeachment of a 10th individual..."[1]

These two statements do not say the same thing and this directly addresses the "why" of declaring martial law, therefore if I remove it, the article fails the WN:5Ws requirement.

Once the quote is corrected, place it back in the review queue I will resume the review. —Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Published) 15:30, 7 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

review please

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Thanks Gryllida (talk) 10:41, 8 December 2024 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 4808386 [Passed]

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