Talk:Shehbaz Sharif becomes new prime minister of Pakistan
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[edit]The source (Reuters) did not name Qureshi but identified him as the foreign minister. --SVTCobra 18:47, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
@SVTCobra: not sure what the NBC source is for. --JJLiu112 (talk) 21:30, 10 April 2022 (UTC)It was one of my original two minimum sources, Reuters published while I was writing so I added it, but I did not remove NBC. If it is entirely redundant now, just delete it.. --SVTCobra 21:33, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
@2006nishan178713: You can't just put information from Wikipedia into the article. If you wish to include that Nawaz Sharif is in London, you'll need to provide a source. Cheers, --SVTCobra 14:21, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
Review of revision 4673751 [Not ready]
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Revision 4673751 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:48, 13 April 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Otherwise VERY well written. Plaudits & apologies for my frequent absence. I hate stale articles too, trust me. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4673751 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:48, 13 April 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Otherwise VERY well written. Plaudits & apologies for my frequent absence. I hate stale articles too, trust me. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- @JJLiu112:. Resubmitted. Dropped the president's name. CNN refers to the Supreme Court as "Pakistan's highest court". Cheers, --SVTCobra 05:03, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
Review of revision 4673851 [Passed]
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Revision 4673851 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:39, 13 April 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Close to the line on freshness, but it makes it. Good article!! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4673851 of this article has been reviewed by Bddpaux (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:39, 13 April 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Close to the line on freshness, but it makes it. Good article!! The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
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[edit]@SVTCobra, why is this not on the main page? 2006nishan178713t@lk 11:31, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
- It was probably an oversight. Do you know how to use Wikinews:Make lead? --SVTCobra 08:23, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
- I do know how to use WN:ML. I probably didn't see it, it is there since the last 14hrs. 2006nishan178713t@lk 08:40, 16 April 2022 (UTC)