Talk:SpaceX launches fifth resupply rocket to International Space Station
Add topicReview of revision 3154911 [Not ready]
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Revision 3154911 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:49, 10 January 2015 (UTC).
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Revision 3154911 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 21:49, 10 January 2015 (UTC).
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- Above review picks up on a number of points I've partially addressed in doing some copyediting. A touch more back story on the aborted launch would easily fill out a third paragraph; as would more detail on the launch rocket (is it a rocket, or a vehicle, if it lands?). --Brian McNeil / talk 22:01, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
I've expanded this out. I haven't attempted to address any lurking copyvio, and I've tried to leave the original text in-place as much as possible, so reviewers please be quite vigilant on that. BRS (Talk) (Contribs) 01:48, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
Review of revision 3155485 [Passed]
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Revision 3155485 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:10, 11 January 2015 (UTC).
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Revision 3155485 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:10, 11 January 2015 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |