Talk:Tasmanians protest against pulp mill

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Review of revision 1231404 [Failed][edit]

  • As of now, some of the sources are out of date and are not time-sensitive. They can be moved to "External links" instead. The format would be
==External links==
*[http://url.com url title]
*[http://url1.com url1 title]

--Gryllida (talk) 07:52, 15 May 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1231848 [Failed][edit]

1232548[edit]

There is one problem with the article. The news itself is the survey + the protest march. It is described only in one sentence at the top. The main two paragraphs that follow relate to the 2006 statement by AMA. In my opinion, the story needs more focus on the news event. --Gryllida (talk) 21:50, 16 May 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1232914 [Passed][edit]