Talk:Tennessee, US former police officers plead not guilty in Tyre Nichols' death

Review of revision 4710272 [Passed]

Revision 4710272 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:57, 18 February 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: @Darkfrog24: I was obliged to edit much here, including two moves. More than I would expect from someone of your experience, perhaps because you haven't written an article since October. Anyhow, I would urge you to read the edit history; these fixes mainly revolved around following inverted pyramid style (complicated, on an article such as this) and maintaining distance from source. I do appreciate your careful following of NPOV, especially regarding the tricky paragraph describing the incident itself. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4710272 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:57, 18 February 2023 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: @Darkfrog24: I was obliged to edit much here, including two moves. More than I would expect from someone of your experience, perhaps because you haven't written an article since October. Anyhow, I would urge you to read the edit history; these fixes mainly revolved around following inverted pyramid style (complicated, on an article such as this) and maintaining distance from source. I do appreciate your careful following of NPOV, especially regarding the tricky paragraph describing the incident itself. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

awkward title

I think the current title is a little weird. Fact and opinion adjectives generally come before origin adjectives, so the title should be something like, "Former Tennessee, US police officers plead not guilty in Tyre Nichols' death." --Ixfd64 (talk) 23:22, 18 February 2023 (UTC)

Upon further reflection, I realize it is so (though this is similar). But we cannot move an article after publication or we'll get double entries in the feeds, which are punished by Google News (yes, I know that one was moved a decade after publication, but it should not be done). Heavy Water (talk) 00:05, 19 February 2023 (UTC)

Would there still be issues if {{DISPLAYTITLE}} is used to correct a title? --Ixfd64 (talk) 00:09, 19 February 2023 (UTC)

No...I don't know if it's been done before. @JJLiu112, what do you think? Heavy Water (talk) 00:11, 19 February 2023 (UTC)

Honestly, I think the title's fine, particularly as it's already published. Generally, unless something's egregious or clearly breaks with style, I say keep it. JJLiu112 (talk) 00:14, 19 February 2023 (UTC)