Talk:Three suicide bombings in Yemen kill security personnel

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Review of revision 4234928 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4234928 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:05, 20 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

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Comments by reviewer:

  • There's been another bombing in Yemen a few hours ago, apparently. Given that, together with the event here being two days back, this in its current form no longer feels fresh.

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Revision 4234928 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:05, 20 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
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Comments by reviewer:

  • There's been another bombing in Yemen a few hours ago, apparently. Given that, together with the event here being two days back, this in its current form no longer feels fresh.

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Review of revision 4235150 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4235150 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:47, 21 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

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Comments by reviewer:

  • There's no second source for the incident on Wednesday. I'm concerned that the facts of that incident may not be universally agreed upon; with only one source, I've no basis on which to judge. (I don't mean to be a stickler for rules, here. I was uncomfortable with the single source for the later incident, and rather than decide immediately I tried to do a sanity check about it — and it looked as if some versions of the incident may say four dead instead of five. So my sanity check failed, and I really feel we need a second source, so we can make an informed choice of attribution on the point.

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Revision 4235150 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 18:47, 21 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
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  • Verifiability: Not ready: See below.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.

Comments by reviewer:

  • There's no second source for the incident on Wednesday. I'm concerned that the facts of that incident may not be universally agreed upon; with only one source, I've no basis on which to judge. (I don't mean to be a stickler for rules, here. I was uncomfortable with the single source for the later incident, and rather than decide immediately I tried to do a sanity check about it — and it looked as if some versions of the incident may say four dead instead of five. So my sanity check failed, and I really feel we need a second source, so we can make an informed choice of attribution on the point.

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Review of revision 4235392 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4235392 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:58, 22 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Suggestion: a bit more background about Aden would made the coverage smoother.

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Revision 4235392 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 19:58, 22 July 2016 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Suggestion: a bit more background about Aden would made the coverage smoother.
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@Pi zero: okay. I have three contract news to cover in one article, will try to help the Munich attack article and then add some information here before the '24-hour' mark. Well, there is done change in the schedule. Per the circumstances, it would be very difficult for me to create articles for a week. I would probably mail you the questions I thought I would ask you on IRC regarding ArbCom.
acagastya 21:38, 22 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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