Talk:Tropical Storm Blanca forms in the Pacific

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Review revision 845190[edit]


{{editprotected}} Blanca is not expected to directly impact land, but anyone with interests in the area are encouraged to track its progress. (Not sure about the second part of the sentence, editing admin take a look and see what you think) Tyrol5 (talk) 22:47, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

I fixed "expected". I decided to leave the second part alone, as it is terribly formal to use "interests" as the subject of the clause, but I don't think it is incorrect. If the article wasn't archived, I would accept your proposal. --InfantGorilla (talk) 11:00, 13 July 2010 (UTC)