Talk:Tropical Storm Danielle forms in Atlantic Ocean

Review of revision 1081820 [Passed]

Revision 1081820 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:48, 23 August 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I can't complain; someone's mis-programmed the phone system, and left me with time to do a review. Main issue with this one was redundancy in wording, and I've dealt with some of the over-passive language. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1081820 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:48, 23 August 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I can't complain; someone's mis-programmed the phone system, and left me with time to do a review. Main issue with this one was redundancy in wording, and I've dealt with some of the over-passive language. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Upgrade to hurricane

If the story developments need a change in the headline, and complete rewrites of the first and second paragraphs, I would suggest that those are clues that the development deserves to be published as a new article.

Don't sell yourself short as a newsgatherer.

Please see Wikinews:Breaking news#For new developments, start new articles

--InfantGorilla (talk) 07:45, 24 August 2010 (UTC)

• Agreed. Common practice in many/most media is to do a new story, but use parts from the earlier one. News is what is known at the time. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 08:48, 24 August 2010 (UTC)

OK. I reverted the change, and re-posted Shankarnikhil88's work with the provisional headline of Atlantic storm Danielle accelerates to hurricane force. --InfantGorilla (talk) 13:25, 24 August 2010 (UTC)