Talk:Two nuclear submarines collide in the Atlantic Ocean

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Review

Revision 768187 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:19, 18 February 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Above, um.. K? --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 00:19, 18 February 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 768187 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:19, 18 February 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Above, um.. K? --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 00:19, 18 February 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Errors of some sort

"Each of their multiple warheads has a blast yield of up to 3.8 megatons — eight times as powerful as the atom bomb dropped on Hiroshima in 1945, The Sun reported." Um, no. The Hiroshima bomb was around 15,000 tons of TNT. So eight times that is only 120 kt. 3.8 Mt is more like 250 times as powerful as the bomb dropped on Hiroshima. Basic math! --98.217.14.211 16:06, 20 February 2009 (UTC)

Typo

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"Britanny" => "Brittany" Van der Hoorn (talk) 19:52, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

Done ♪Tempo di Valse ♪ 21:05, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Category request

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Please add Category:Submarines. Thanks, Bencherlite (talk) 12:49, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

Done --Pi zero (talk) 12:22, 9 November 2010 (UTC)