Talk:Two slain in knife attack at Swedish IKEA furniture retailer

Notes

• Translation 1 from Swedish (SVT): ”Det är den värsta arbetsdagen i mitt liv.” Så beskriver Mattias Johansson, varuhuschef på Ikea i Västerås, via Google Translate: "It is the worst working day of my life." So describes Mattias Johansson, department manager at Ikea in Vasteras ... My translation is slightly different due to my expertise in Scandinavian languages, but I think it is better.
• Translation 2 from Swedish (VLT): Det var en 55-årig kvinna och hennes 28-årige son som knivmördades på Ikea. På husgerådsavdelningen slog mördarna till – polisen beskriver det som en ”galen händelse” och att mamman och sonen kan ha blivit slumpmässigt attackerade. ... Google: There was a 55-year-old woman and her 28-year-old son who was murdered knife at Ikea. In the housewares department broke the killers to - police describe it as a "crazy event," and that the mother and son may have been randomly attacked.

This article is not my best work. The prose feels a bit clunky. Be gentle. --SVTCobra 21:07, 10 August 2015 (UTC)

Infobox

Should not the infobox be of Crime and law instead of Sweden?
14.139.242.195 (talk) 01:37, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

Either would be a reasonable choice. The Sweden angle seems rather prominent in this case (perhaps it feels that way because two of the sources are in Swedish.) --Pi zero (talk) 02:08, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

That is entirely unimportant to me. I guess the whole Sweden and IKEA combo got to me (?). Of course, when Wikinews becomes super-huge, we'll have infoboxes for "Crime in Sweden" etc. For now, I just thought having any appropriate infobox was fine. Change it if you like. Cheers.--SVTCobra 02:44, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

I rather like the choice of Sweden, myself. --Pi zero (talk) 03:00, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

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Revision 3730948 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:59, 11 August 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: If the background data on Västerås was in the sources, I missed it. Wikipedia is, of course, inherently not trust-worthy; I did try to straightforwardly verify some of that stuff, but (as often happens) the Wikipedia article cited sources that the information could not feasibly be extracted from; and even my attempt to verify the distance using google maps fell through. I did manage to verify the approximate population (though not the part about the suburbs). Please do cite trust-worthy sources when providing background info. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 3730948 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:59, 11 August 2015 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: If the background data on Västerås was in the sources, I missed it. Wikipedia is, of course, inherently not trust-worthy; I did try to straightforwardly verify some of that stuff, but (as often happens) the Wikipedia article cited sources that the information could not feasibly be extracted from; and even my attempt to verify the distance using google maps fell through. I did manage to verify the approximate population (though not the part about the suburbs). Please do cite trust-worthy sources when providing background info. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.