Talk:Welsh University announces intelligent robot conducting biology experiments
Add topicTitle
[edit]The title really ought be more "news-like" and adhere to WN:NC. --SVTCobra 01:59, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
- Me thinks this title may be closer to WN:NCSriMesh | talk 03:57, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
Review
[edit]
Revision 798449 of this article has been reviewed by Skenmy (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:47, 4 April 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The whole thing reads like a press release - not a news article. Definately newsworthy, just needs writing as such. --Skenmy talk Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 798449 of this article has been reviewed by Skenmy (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:47, 4 April 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The whole thing reads like a press release - not a news article. Definately newsworthy, just needs writing as such. --Skenmy talk Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- Replied to Skenmy for a teeny bit of clarification, then can make improvements. Kind of lost right now.SriMesh | talk 03:57, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
Second review
[edit]
Revision 799261 of this article has been reviewed by Skenmy (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 09:34, 5 April 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Solved all concerns of mine! I'm happy to pass this and publish. --Skenmy talk 09:34, 5 April 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 799261 of this article has been reviewed by Skenmy (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 09:34, 5 April 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Solved all concerns of mine! I'm happy to pass this and publish. --Skenmy talk 09:34, 5 April 2009 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |