Talk:Western Australia Nationals MP Vince Catania to resign from state parliament
Review of revision 4680384 [Passed][edit]
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Revision 4680384 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:04, 11 June 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: 1. Please standardise captions. They ensure consistency across articles, no matter who's writing them. This is like how we agree to use mm-dd-yyyy. 2. Everything included should be relevant to a preceding point, or else establish a new one. The driver's licence (not license) relates to the size of the electorate, & you did well to mention his children when Catania spoke of family. Otherwise, good job. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4680384 of this article has been reviewed by JJLiu112 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 05:04, 11 June 2022 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: 1. Please standardise captions. They ensure consistency across articles, no matter who's writing them. This is like how we agree to use mm-dd-yyyy. 2. Everything included should be relevant to a preceding point, or else establish a new one. The driver's licence (not license) relates to the size of the electorate, & you did well to mention his children when Catania spoke of family. Otherwise, good job. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- Thanks for reviewing -- was not aware of Australian government style guide, will consult in future in tandem with WN style guide. --LivelyRatification (talk) 07:50, 11 June 2022 (UTC)