Talk:Yemen: Former president Ali Abdullah Saleh killed in Sana'a by Houthi militants
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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Pi zero in topic Review of revision 4368832 [Passed]
@De Wikischim: this article is currently under minimal length consider adding more information.
•–• 21:42, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
- I've just expanded it a little. De Wikischim (talk) 22:03, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
- @De Wikischim: Just in case if you can not find more information, you might want to check Al Jazeera and/or Al Arabia. We need at least three medium sized paragraphs. Also, "who see him now as a traitor", "With Saleh's death, there is practically no hope left at all of short-term peace in Yemen." and "His death is considered a victory for the Houthi." seems like Wikinews is suggesting it. Opinions should not be in the article. These are the things which needs to be addressed, however I do not want to flag it "not-ready" right now, because it looks like you are online and might be able to address the issue.
•–• 22:06, 4 December 2017 (UTC)- These passages are just a summary of opinions uttered by others. They are not intended as opinions themselves. (I for my part have no specific opinion on this whole story.) De Wikischim (talk) 22:13, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
- @De Wikischim: We do not publish someone's opinion. We can quote others, who has something to do with the story, but no opinions. Those sentences looks as if Wikinews is claiming it.
•–• 22:20, 4 December 2017 (UTC)- I've changed them now. De Wikischim (talk) 22:23, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
- @De Wikischim: We do not publish someone's opinion. We can quote others, who has something to do with the story, but no opinions. Those sentences looks as if Wikinews is claiming it.
- These passages are just a summary of opinions uttered by others. They are not intended as opinions themselves. (I for my part have no specific opinion on this whole story.) De Wikischim (talk) 22:13, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
- @De Wikischim: Just in case if you can not find more information, you might want to check Al Jazeera and/or Al Arabia. We need at least three medium sized paragraphs. Also, "who see him now as a traitor", "With Saleh's death, there is practically no hope left at all of short-term peace in Yemen." and "His death is considered a victory for the Houthi." seems like Wikinews is suggesting it. Opinions should not be in the article. These are the things which needs to be addressed, however I do not want to flag it "not-ready" right now, because it looks like you are online and might be able to address the issue.
Review of revision 4368832 [Passed]
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Revision 4368832 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:05, 6 December 2017 (UTC).
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The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4368832 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:05, 6 December 2017 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer:
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |