Talk:2012 Report on Gender Equality and Development says US women have room for progress

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I have chosen to look at some of this from a country perspective because most of the reporting and blogging commentary I have seen focuses on overall global trends, rather than looking deeply at the report from a nationalistic perspective to see what it says overall about women. This is why I have submitted two articles on this topic. (Plus, this report 426 pages long. There is a huge, huge amount of material here. It is also an important document that will be used by key decision makers. Thus writing about it is very, very important.) This one focuses more on Internet and politicians and mortality.

Comments are inline. I have tried not to draw conclusions and state only the results. Some of this involves comparing things. Had issues with organizing. Not sure what is most important. :/ The article may need a rename. That is fine. No preference for how to fix the title. --LauraHale (talk) 22:55, 25 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

I would be okay with mortality rates paragraph being removed and the paragraph comparing education rates in Africa to USA historical numbers. --LauraHale (talk) 23:20, 25 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

Review of revision 1997891 [Passed]

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{{editprotected}} Please add a closing bracket after "[[mathematics|math]", in the second-to-last paragraph. Heavy Water (talk) 18:55, 21 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Done --SVTCobra 14:39, 12 January 2024 (UTC)Reply