Talk:Australian Greens leader criticises media ethics
Review of revision 1281245 [Failed][edit]
 |
Revision 1281245 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:05, 2 September 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article failed review for the following reasons, 1) No lead. Please see the style guide, especially its section about first paragraph. 2) Each paraphraph is one sentence long. This is difficult to comprehend. Please fix the issues and then re-submit the article for re-review. Thank you. -Gryllida 00:05, 2 September 2011 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 1281245 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:05, 2 September 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: The article failed review for the following reasons, 1) No lead. Please see the style guide, especially its section about first paragraph. 2) Each paraphraph is one sentence long. This is difficult to comprehend. Please fix the issues and then re-submit the article for re-review. Thank you. -Gryllida 00:05, 2 September 2011 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1282292 [Passed][edit]
 |
Revision 1282292 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:45, 3 September 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Extensive copyedit work required prior to publication, well worth reviewing edit history as a learning experience. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1282292 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:45, 3 September 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Extensive copyedit work required prior to publication, well worth reviewing edit history as a learning experience. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |