Talk:Bystanders foil knife-weilding man on London Bridge with fire extinguisher, whale tusk

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Review of revision 4531000 [Not ready][edit]

"Conference for criminals wishing to rehabilitate"[edit]

This was a conference about rehabilitation. Any interested members of public were able to attend. I have found no evidence of the attendees, or a part of the audience, being necessarily criminals themselves. --Gryllida (talk) 22:30, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

Changed layout, added details, re submitted[edit]

Gryllida (talk) 22:48, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

Review of revision 4531187 [Passed][edit]

Thank you for the review and detailed editing. I found it particularly useful, for my future reference, that sentences like "N victims died" should be complemented with dates - as others may or may not die, or be discovered, on a later day. This is important. Thank you, Pi zero. --Gryllida (talk) 23:48, 2 December 2019 (UTC)